Ryouko Deimos

Name: Ryouko Letus Deimos (known as the scornofhell)
Age:
Gender: Male
Species: Tree Elvish
Class: warrior/marksman
Occupation: none
Town: kanto forests

Personal Information

Personality: ryouko's personality is quite simple, he tends to be a loner (not suprizeing for his race), he has a bad temper when it comes to people mistreating a female,he can work with others if he chooses to. he tends to show his feelings more in action rather than words.

Likes: battle,meat(uncommon for his race),music
Dislikes: being told what to do, men mistreating women
Fears: growing old,seeing a loved one die,
Sexual Orientation: Strait

Appearence Information

Looks:

Spoiler:

Height: 7ft
Weight: 95lbs
Eye Color: light green
Hair Color: silver
Hair Style: long strait hair (leangth is to hish shoulders
Special Appearances: there is a cracking like tattoo going from his shoulder up his neck slightly and down his arm along with his back also.

Basic Abilities, Techniques and Equipment

Equipment: bow, an elven sword, knifes,a small pouch on his lower leg containing potions and poisons.

Basic Powers: none
Ability:the elven enhances of the senses and basic physical ability and natural magic usage. Ryouko can Manipulate blood as well.

Technigues: swordsmanship, marksmanship, plant and animal knowledge along with hunting skills,blacksmithing

Relationship Information

Parents/Guardians: Both his parents names are not known to him, both his mother and father disappeared when he was a child
Brothers/Sisters: none
Lover:none
Idol: none
Mentor: he had a few to teach him the skills he needed but their names were forgotten over the years
Rival: none
Friend: his only friend and companion has ben a small crow named ryumaru, this crow never leaves his side and will most likely be perched on his shoulder or head, this crow has ben used for communication and hunting.

Background Information

History:when he was a child his mother abandoned him, this mentally scared him thus giving him a split personality, for about a few years after he went on a rampage killing all he came across, this gave him the name jack the ripper, after those brutal years, he became himself again,he then returned to the forest. as he then began to hone his skill as a warrior, he spent a few 100 years honeing his skills, he learned some magic to keep mental barriers in place to keep jack from re entering his mind. since he left and killed quiet a bit of people in his younger years the councile of the elfs wouldnt hear of him joining their armys, so he wanderd off into the deeper parts of the forest were the woodland elfs lived.

Roleplaying Sample

the male would look up at the thick canopy of the forest, seeing the light getting dimmer, ryouko knew it was getting late and almost time to camp. so the male decided to make a camp, he would pull a leaf from a near by bush makeing it into a circular cup shape, as he would pull his knife from his side, cutting into the dree to get the sap from it,the sap filled the tiny cup, he then broke a piece off a tree limb and another leaf, he would then tie the leaf around the bottom of the limb and set it into the sappy mixture, he then tied another piece of the leaf to the top of the limb piece. the male then gracefuly climbed up the tree useing limbs and nocks to use as footing, he then lit the make shift candle he made and made his bed from the trees leaves and limbs to make a makeshift hammock. the male layed in it, and pulled out a piece of bread from his pouch and began to eat it slowly.

Your personality is too short, it needs to be a paragraph at least.

Elves are vegetarian? since when? the forest is full of meat, and just becouse they are consivertive about hunting habbits (only kill what you can eat and waist nothing) does not mean we don't like meat.

Growing old? you do know that elves of both races live to be about 200 years old right?

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Ability:the elven enhances of the senses and basic physical ability and natural magic usage. Ryouko can Manipulate blood as well.

your ability is very vague, and also there are two things wrong with it. An ability is something unique to you and you alone. The elven racial ability of long distance sight is something that belongs to all elven races.

the next bit is where you talk about magic, thats fine if your a shina elf there magic and technology is one and the same, but the wood elves in this story line have shunned magic, and it is heavily frowned upon. also magic is under power, not ability.

Manipulation of blood is called blood magic this is a power and it needs to be elaborated on by a lot. telling me you can manipulate blood tells me nothing can you use the blood of your enemy? your blood only the blood in your body or does it have to be spilled first, this is very very vague and can not be accepted as it stands.

Your ability is the one thing thats unique to this character, not just something he can do its his ultimate power the one thing that will eventually branch off and define him as a warrior or marksmen or what ever. its the one power that no one else can learn.

Your techniques are also flawed in that these are supposed to be the extensions of your abilities\powers. they are in a way your spell book, not just how you handle yourself in combat but actual fighting styles\stances.

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Basic Powers: none

Kind of out of order becouse this isn't really something wroung with your app if you don't want a power thats fine. but you list of nature magic and blood magic, again you can only learn one of these things but power is where any kind of magic goes, and then provide a defination of what that magic means. for instance with nature magic, what does that mean, can he heal the forest? is he a druid of sorts? same with blood magic what does it mean, and then use techniques to describe how he uses it.

Need to put in an age, and a weight that's more believable then 95lbs. Also while all elves have an extended life span, they still have issues in their old age, and u won't find one over a hundred years old running about the forest. They might be something else, but not a ranger in the field directly. Also what maso said about ur abilities and powers also holds true.

Denied until fixed.